Author Topic: Proofreading - bubblegum23 [fail]  (Read 356 times)

0 Members and 1 Guest are viewing this topic.

Bubblegum23

  • Newbie
  • *
  • Posts: 3
    • View Profile
Proofreading - bubblegum23 [fail]
« on: June 01, 2018, 08:36:26 am »
Username: Bubblegum23

Timezone: GMT +5 hours

Age group: 15-17

Availability schedule: 9:30 am to 12:00 noon
                                        (Most days)
                                       P.s   Full time free on sundays

No work experience

Preferred projects: To you, the immortal(or any)

Info: I'm a GCSE student and English is my second language but I'm pretty good at it . Also, I'm learning Japanese so, right now I'm learning the basics

« Last Edit: June 16, 2018, 03:18:47 am by murakumo »

Royalblue

  • Administrator
  • Hero Member
  • *****
  • Posts: 694
    • View Profile
Re: Proofreading - bubblegum23
« Reply #1 on: June 02, 2018, 03:13:19 am »
Hi bubblegum23.

Test: Sense-scans Proofreading Test
All you need is in that file, make sure there is a noticeable way for us to tell where you fixed the mistakes, whether it be a new line with the changes bolded or comments style.

You have until June 9th to complete this test.

Please PM me your test when you complete it.

Good luck

Bubblegum23

  • Newbie
  • *
  • Posts: 3
    • View Profile
Re: Proofreading - bubblegum23
« Reply #2 on: June 07, 2018, 05:44:07 pm »
044
Title: It’s not a manga!
 
045
P2B1: Well~ I was surprised because the garden is muddy.
P2B2: I wondered if it rained only in this place.
P3B1: We had [/color]so much fun~
P3B2: I didn’t know we’d have so much fun [/color]and have a quick bath in the tub.
P4B1: I think it
might[/b] become a habit.
 
046
P1B1: Let’s wear [/color]a swimsuit next time, Akine-chan!
P1B2: After so many [/color]years I want to wear one again
P1B3: That’s a good idea, Mariko-san! [/color]Which model [/color]will be suitable?
P1B4: Maybe thongs?
P2B1: Do they intend for the [pandemonium] to happen again…
P3B1: What are you laughing about?
P3B2: Nothing
P3B3: It just [/color]sounds funny ...
P4B1: If you say so~
P4B2: Okay, let’s eat as soon as possible~
P4B3: [/color]The kakiage is getting cold!!!
*T/N: Mixed vegetable and seafood tempura
P5B1: Ah
P6B1: A
P6B2: Aaaaahhhhhhh
 
047
P1B1: The…
P1B2: The smell of kakiage!!!!!!!!!
P1B3: Furuhonya-san…
P2B1: Sakamushi!
P3B1: And
P3B2: Japanese rice wine!
P3 label on sake: No 1 in Japan
P4B1: JAPAN IS THE BEST
P4B2: I’M HOME!
 
048
P1B1: We-welcome back, Furuhonya-san
P1B2: Yeah! It’s my appearance in this story after a year and a half, you jerk!
P1B3: Since Chapter 17, huh…
P2B1: I MISSED YOU ALL
P2B2: RICE!
P2B3: Yes, yes, please wait
P3B1: I [/color]didn't even knew that it’s possible to sniff the smell like that
P3 beside B2: OOOOOHHH~ RICE~
P3B2: Tsk
P4B1: Maybe he did really sniff it out
P4B2: Whatever
P5B1: Here
P5B2: Ooooh, this is the phantom shochu!
*T/N: This shochu is called ‘Isami’ and it is said to be the origin of premier shochu.
P6B1: The other day in my solo exhibition, I met someone who owed me a favour
P6B2: When I strangled him for a bit, he gave that to me
 
049
P1B1: This Kinzanji miso and the small fish dressed in the sauce that I haven’t tasted for a long time goes really well with the shochu!
P1B2: I’m glad to be Japanese!
P2B1: Come [/color]come, it’s the kids’ menu here!
P2B2: Oooohhh!
P3B1: Wo….w
P3B2: I can’t handle this taste
 
050
P3B1: Really
P3B2: Daily lives are the best
P5B1: I’ve calmed down
P5B1: The coffee after the meal is delicious too
 
051
P1B1: Which reminds me,did you bring anything interesting this time, Kottouya-san?
P1B2: Hm?
P1B3: Well
P2B1: There is something but…
P3B1: What is it? Don’t leave us hanging and show us~
P3B2: Hmm
P4B1: …Well, that’s fine
P4B2: It’s alright
P5B1: …I wonder if it’s going to be alright…

Royalblue

  • Administrator
  • Hero Member
  • *****
  • Posts: 694
    • View Profile
Re: Proofreading - bubblegum23
« Reply #3 on: June 08, 2018, 01:51:44 am »

Please PM me your test when you complete it.


Which part of that was not clear?

Bubblegum23

  • Newbie
  • *
  • Posts: 3
    • View Profile
Re: Proofreading - bubblegum23
« Reply #4 on: June 08, 2018, 04:22:58 pm »
How do I PM this?

murakumo

  • Recruitment Moderator
  • Sr. Member
  • *
  • Posts: 336
  • the flaming pineapple
    • View Profile
Re: Proofreading - bubblegum23
« Reply #5 on: June 16, 2018, 03:18:30 am »
Thanks for applying, unfortunately you have failed the test
❤☆*・°˖・*♪~働くより死ぬ~♪*・˖°・*☆❤