Ao no Orchestra Chapter 1 v2

[Royalblue]

Ao no Orchestra


Made an error, somehow the spread got pushed to the last page for no reason. Not sure how much it affected the story but w/e :/
I'll update the zip file when I get more time.

Read Online: SE Reader
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[Mohameddo]

so about the spread.. It's supposed to be page 31 right ?
page 31 on the reader right now is what's supposed to be page 32 but  stretched and cropped weirdly.
and page 33 and 34 are the same page now.

[dahunter136]

Looks like a solid manga. I think its going to follow the same basic arc as My Lie In April. That was good so hope this is just as good.

[Oni Giri]

Nice first chapter, will see where it goes

[GDAFF]

Hello, I've read this chapter and found some things lacking in consistency. Like

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in Page 27, where Akine goes, "The teacher isn't here?" yet later refers to the teacher as "Sensei". And a few translation errors, such as translating そうじゃない as "Like this, huh?" at Page 28. Plus, at Page 35, Akine says "What's garbage?!" and Aono replies "Garbage!" which is kind of strange. Akine's line is a rhetorical question, which makes the sentence equivalent to "My playing is not garbage!" hence why Aono replies in Japanese, "It is garbage!" You could even change Aono's reply to something more natural, like "Your playing!" and it would improve the original translation that was put in.

I want to help proofread your future translations of this manga. It also helps that I'm caught up the raws. I just want to help the translation of this manga to be as high quality as possible.

[Royalblue]

Hey there, if you are interested in working on AnO, please apply on our recruitment thread. http://sensescans.com/index.php?board=1.0